Heyy, I've just been going over the Horus Heresy page and there's an error under the Unification section.
There's a picture of Kiron, an Emperor's Children warrior, listed as a Thunder Warrior. The artwork used is from the cover of the Outcast Dead, and it's also his character card from the Horus Heresy Legions card game.
Did you not want the info from his wounded after he was shot down in Slaves to darkness that I added on there? It was large part of his story in that book happening after he broke orders. I know in a book i cant rememeber name to he had a missing left eye replaced with a simple blank silver ball augmetic. well in Slaves to darkness after being shot down he wakes in the apothcary. he notices he cant see and the magos there tells him his bionic was turned off and that his remaining eye along with that side of his head was lost in the blast. well after turning his eye back on volk sees that he is just a fusion of augmetics and burnt flesh with a head now made of iron as well as all of his limbs missing. idk i just thought it was large part of his lore in that this guy is basically mostly machine now.
I understand that you are trying to be helpful and thank you. But it is not a character page for him. You included that piece of information at length and in more detail than necessary but left out many other far more important things from his biography which simply left the entry incomplete and therefore unhelpful.
Don't create an entry unless you know ALL of the information on that subject and all of the sources. You do not have the experience to create entries for us and this is really not a wiki for beginners to just jump right in.
In general, we ask new users to learn our formatting and guidelines before making any major edits. If you want to be helpful, it would be best if you started by checking existing pages for factual errors and typos until you are much more familiar with our content and formats.
Additionally, I cannot respond to every concern you have every day, though thank you for all the cool things you've added and brought to my attention.
Its minor nothing major but I noticed under gear it says he wielded his wolf claw. This is actually incorrect as he never used the claw until after he lost his left arm. There is a short story I can't remember the name but he tells how he stole the claw from the Space Wolves forge. Basically the claw is his left hand, it replaced his hand rather then just having been worn.
Gorgutz 'Ead 'Unter was to win on Lorn V and Kronus. Orks are either impossible to defeat, or with great difficulty, and their opponents are insignificant weaklings (although the Necrons and Chaos could give some kind of rebuff), which in fact, they could not lose.
So I was looking through the Ultra Marines codex and I found this image. no were in the book does it state he became a Dreadnought, but this Dreadnought in the pic does share his name and exact company number. I dont think thats just a coincidence.
I'm sorry I can't respond to all these queries. I've got a lot of other duties, and I can't just respond to one person's queries every day, so let's slow this down unless you find a really gaping factual problem on a page, which I am happy to correct.
As for Maximus Epathus I need a lot more evidence that that is the name of the Dreadnought in the picture. We don't operate on supposition, theory, or inference, only what has been stated outright in GW or GW-licensed sources. This does not mean in any way that you are incorrect, only that it does not yet meet the standard of proof.
I understand that thanks though. I was going to ask though if you could unlock the Contemptor Dreadnought page real quick. I wanted to add the names of who the different dreadnought characters are to the images section. I see most of them have them but a few are missing some. I figured if you unlocked the page for it I could do it myself instead of making you do the work.
Warframelord please don't add lore to large pages, those stories are much more detailed than what you are adding and it really isn't up to our quality standards. If you want to be helpful as a new editor, if you find any major factual errors, please let me know and I can repair them.
I was going to add Dreadnought Radamarr from Clan Dorrvok to iron hands notable members, but the page is locked rn. I find him a neat additon in that he is the main character in his short story and is actually a dreadnought whos pilot isnt inside. hes just a soul in a dread. The story goes on about his unit being wiped out by xenos and he is found cut in half by a wolf priest called Jathrac. the wolf priest was going around gathering the geneseed of Radamarrs fallen brothers. but when he gets to Radamarr, the dread tells him not to gather his as he is not worthy. well anyhow it gets to him opening the dread and finding out there is no pilot inside left just wires and bone cogs. The story is Iron Soul by Phil Kelly. I have a pdf of it if need for sources.
Also it should be added to his character info in notable members that Dreadnought Furnous as of The newest Iron Hands codex was removed from his old Dreadnought shell and is now put into Redemptor Dreadnought.
Hi again Montonius I had seen you are working on the page for Veritas Ferrum and was going to change the name under known vessels on iron hands page to a link to its page your working on but seen it was locked.
Also I was kinda curious if u had seen the lore from Belisarius Cawl Great Work about Alpha Primus. he was like a prototype Primaris Marine and was actually even stronger then the normal ones and the only of his kind. His lore was really neat and he make a good addition to the Primaris page or even his own page.