Board Thread:Warhammer 40k Roleplay/@comment-28917471-20150603055254/@comment-25177957-20150625201302

Great job ZiXIS, but like Supah said, it would be good if you added more info in on how he discovered the Imperial Truth, as it is a thousands of years old dead religion (it would be like a modern person believing in Stone Age animinism). Also, why does he believe in the Imperial Truth exactly? I can see the part where he doesn't think the Emperor is divine, but 10,000 or more years of warfare against Chaos has proven the Imperial Truth wrong many times to those within the Imperium, would Alair still believe the daemons are xenos, or that Chaos followers are simply madmen? I would think that a 41st millennium believer in the Imperial Truth would be most likely among the Ordo Xenos. Despite that, a Witch-Hunter might be able to pull it off in the case that they are rarely sent to deal with witches.

Also, perhaps it could use some more details on what Alair's life and missions as an Inquisitor were like.