User talk:Algrim Whitefang

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Hi, welcome to Warhammer 40k! Thanks for your edit to the Space Wolves 13th Company page.

Hail Algrim,

I found myself unable to edit the White Scars page, so I'm turning to you. I seek aid in fulfilling my duty to abolish typos and other errors.

I found quite a list in the White Scars article, maybe you could get rid of them? Here they are in order of appearance

1. missing space between "the" and "Chapter History" in last sentence of "Chapter History" 2. double "them" in last sentence, 1st block in "Lords of War" 3. an "is" instead of an "it" in the 6th Sentence, 2nd block in "The Warhawk and the Crimson King" 4. double "the" in 5th sentence, 2nd block in "A Legion Divided" 5. "traitorous" Brotherhood of the Storm in 1st sentence, 6th block in "A Legion Divided" --> that Brotherhood was loyal! 6. "here" instead of "hear" in the 2nd sentence, 1st block in "The Death Lord" 7. "are" instead of "has" in the 1st sentence (the citation), 3rd block in "A Primarch's Wrath" 8. "draw_" ... a "n" is missing in the last sentence, 6th block in "A Primarch's Wrath" 9. The White Scars are never mentioned in the "Fires of Phaistos (533.M39)" campaign, it is a campaign of the Salamanders 10. The White Scars are never mentioned in "The Badab War (906-913.M41)" campaign, it is a campaign of the Salamanders 11. Double space after "Cadian Shock Troops" in "The Bloodskar Hunt (964.M41)" campaign in "Notable Campaigns" 12. "slayed" instead of "slain" in the last sentence in "Master of the Hunt" in "Special Ranks" 13. "are" instead of "is" in the 5th sentence, 1st block in "Chapter Combat Doctrine" 14. double "the" in the 3rd sentence of "Kor'sarro Khan" in "Notable White Scars"

There are also various –- and -– instead of -- in the first parts of the article.

Thanks for hearing me, I will go back and seek more typos.

For the Emperor!

Vo0DoO40k (talk) 12:08, October 26, 2015 (UTC)