Board Thread:Warhammer 40k Roleplay/@comment-28917471-20150603055254/@comment-25177957-20150605170713

Well I think you're taking the wrong look at the perspective here, it's being told from a third person view, Kreisner's family does not know of a war on Vraks, all they know is that the main man of the household left one day, and never returned. I was also origininally to set the bio up so that Kreisner would join the Schola Progenium, but decided that him going through the telepathica would be the best way. And I might rechange the bio to go in that direction.

Like I said, I'll probably need to change around the bio so that Kreisner is an Inquisitor who was trained in his teenage years to adulthood in the Progenium, that way, through the courses, it can be said he was taught about the Siege of Vraks but of course, with extremely vague information.

Umm, I'm not sure what makes you think that on the Storm Trooper part, because the Storm Trooper obviously recognizes that Kreisner is an Acolyte, and a fellow throne agent. Not just some psyker, or even an astropath. An Inquisitorial Storm Trooper who is afraid of psykers should not even be serving in the Inquisition.

Yes, Kreisner and his mastress are Puritan, but you're forgetting that the methods of operation used by puritans in the Ordo Malleus might seem radical to those not in the Ordo. Any Inquisitor needs to know the machinations of the daemon to fight them more effectively. Yet that does not mean they need to use their enemies weapons, side with their enemy, or try to sympathize with the daemon. The Ordo Malleus is the Ordo at the greatest risk of being corrupted by Chaos, so even a puritan might be weak unless they know their enemies tactics. For example the Grimoire of True Names is coveted by both puritan and radical.

I appreciate the criticism but keep in mind that this is in no way the final draft.