Board Thread:Warhammer 40k General Discussion/@comment-14745711-20130906234048/@comment-180.95.18.31-20160714034252

I copied and pasted this off someone else on the original thread to point out it's plot holes (sorry orginal writer)

The End times...

The Chaos Gods stage a consipracy, Nurgle unleashes a flash of Galactic plauges, Tzeech guides Abaddon in abreak out from the Eye of Terror, Korne ushers a Demon breakout from the Teraa warp rift, and Slaneesh corrupts an Adeptus Sorotias.

In the chaos and anarchy the corrupoted Sorotias is able to gain acess to the throne room and 'help' herself to the Emperor's DNA, then slink away unseen.

Once she is impregnated, Slaneesh turns on Nurgle, killing him and claiming his bride Isha. This causes Tzeech and Korne to turn their focus on Slaneesh and Abaddon's forces collapse from infighting.

After the Eclisarchy and inquisition confirm the (corrupted) Soritia's claim of immaculate conception with the Emperor's child she is named Empress, and in turn starts corrupting the upper escelons of the Imperium.

Some learn of her corruption, but not enough in high enough realms of power are untouched. A second Heresy results, stabilizing with the Imperium being split between "west" (ruled by the Corrupted Empress and then her daughter) and the "east" Imperium which maintains the old faith and is dedicated to excising the corruption.

The daughter of the Empress becomes the "God Empress of Mankind" and has some of her father's abilities (long life, but dampened psychic ability.) However being 'touched' by Slaneesh she is corrupted and spreads corruption deeper into the 'west' Imperium.

The 'east' Imperium has a split in of itself, some believe the "God Empress" being geneticly the Emperor's sire is uncorruptable. This weakens the East Imperium playing into an 'eternal cease fire' that last centuries until the 'God Empress'" corruption is beyond doubt and the breakaway faction repents.

By this time Korne and Tzeeche have helped Abbadon rebuild the Chaos legions after Slaneesh's treachery and Nurgle's demise, and start a war against the 'west' Imperium, THe God Empress and her forces do rather well..even retaking Cadia (which fell in the orginal chaos conspiracy and remained tainted after the betrayl of Slaneesh.)

This causes a rash of defections from the 'east' Imperium, by this point this pint the rulership of the 'east' Imperium reluctantly agrees fight alongside the west in defeating chaos, intent on turning their guns on the 'west' and "purifing" Segmentum Solar once the forces of Abbadon are routed.

War, unlike any, many skulls for the skull throne, torrents of blood for the blood God. Tzeeche switches sides and him and Slaneesh slay Korne, as the the intense warfare makes Korne an overiding threat.

The Golden throne finally fails and the God Emperor dies. The forces of Abaddon are routed by the allied Imperium, but the 'east' Imperium's plans fall apart. The 'west' Imperium's heidonistic shift plus the God Empress' actualy competency (with powers of seduction and corruption to match) lead to much of the 'east' Imperium in revolt.

Slaneesh and Tzeeche go about ploting their next course, only for Slaneesh to slay Tzeeche (Slaneesh's corruption of the West Imperium grants him power surpassing his birth by the Eldar.) Slaneesh is rewarded by his success to find Isha pregnant with (obstensively) his spawn.

The 'east' Imperium shatters into several smaller states, which constantly lose ground to various xenos. The 'west' Imperium slowly reclaims the territory but is faced with Xeno's threats of it's own.

Isha gives birth, a cataclismic event that rivals the creation of the Eye of Terror. A new rift encompassing the whole of Segmentum Solar, the "eye of Terra" is born. Holy Terra is wiped clean, claiming the 'God Emperess' and her corrupted court. Warp storms make space travel completely impossible once more shatering all civilization.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:26px;">Slaneesh is struck down by his newborn "son", The Chaos God of Order, the God Emperor Reborn. Holy Terra and the heart of the 'Eye of Terra' becomes his realm.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:26px;margin-bottom:0px!important;">The galaxy is condemned to cold Order, no free will, all destiny's planned to the last detail by the God of Order. No joy, no passion, no gallantry, no freinship. There is only order. Those in the galactic fringe will try to resist, but it is without hope. All else of humanity is coldly dedicated to Order, and nothing can stop that tide.

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<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:26px;margin-bottom:0px!important;">1. The Chaos gods can't die. they can be beaten but not killed in sense that they die.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:26px;margin-bottom:0px!important;">2. how would the Sis of battle tratior conecive the child in the first place. The daughter is possible as in the canon the emp's daughters were regular humans but sometimes inherited his ablites so it is possible in a genetic stand point.