Board Thread:Warhammer 40k Roleplay/@comment-28917471-20150313070550/@comment-28917471-20150323223254

"Wasting no time on a greeting to the astropath or Vorst, she quickly makes her growing irratation known to them."

I'm not trying to be picky, but here is a note. If my grammar skills are not failing me, then I'm pretty sure that the "a" letter after the word on should not be there, so is the word "to" that comes right after the word greeting.

Just some small grammar mistakes that I wanted to point out. Don't take it personally, we all do these mistakes.

Now, Daniella and Danny. I need you to react to each other and to Achillus  (Anutk), and then I will erange all other  players to meet up at the Cathedral  (since there is not enough interaction between the players, in my opinion). After that, you will finally have some  action... hehehehehehe... (evil giggling).