User blog comment:LEONIDAS 666/The Unforgive Arch Angels/@comment-156.108.20.68-20120720193336

First of All a Gargantuan Squiggoth is extremely massive, a gargantuan squiggoths respective size can vary from a reaver class titan to a Warlord class titan. There are hardly any space marines that could take one down, probably only a handful of chapter masters. The fact he could kill one by himself is insane with no super human abilities besides a little bit of being a psyker. I thought you were tlaking about a young primarch until I read more lol. I htink it would drastically improve the story if you built up more of how he became so good at combat and fleshed out his character a little more. Make him have a hard time, when the main character flies throuhg with no resistance the story gets boring, there are a few animes where that isn't the case (Helsing) but just build up your characters background a little more. Although you havea nice skeleton outline keep it up ^_^