Board Thread:Warhammer 40k Roleplay/@comment-28917471-20150129223842/@comment-28917471-20150213221113

Danny... let's start with the first paragraph, you said that King killed an entire crew of the vessel. But that is just too hard to believe! Viper-class Scout Sloop is the smallest warp-capable vessel of the Battlefleet Calixis, and it harbours 7,500 people. I don't think that King could kill at least 7,500 people, and not get caught while killing so many people on board.

Being a merc will not make you rich, mercenaries are hired in groups, and they work in groups too (the payment is not always good, and the mercs most often must work for whatever price they are presented). What you ment was probably the career of a Bounty-hunter or that of the Assassian.

Trying to kill a Planetary Governor? It is like saying that a veteran soldier wants to kill a presedent of some country. I don't know... sounds like an impossible plan, and why would he, from all the people be framed for the murder?

How did King recieve the bionic eye?

I'm sure that the ball would be heavily guarded, the host of that event would more likely to have his private army put everywhere. Again, 10 armed people against, I don't know... dozens or hundreds armed guns-for-hire? I don't think that this is one of the battles that King could win.

Also, Nobles could not give King their Warrent of Trade, as the Warrent is signed for a specific person. Taking someone else Warrent of Trade (while the document is licensed under a whole diffirent name), is like taking someone else passport and use it to move between borders, while the name and the picture of the passoirt is entirely different from the person that carries it.

The Warrent of Trade can be only given by the Sector Governors, the Administratium, or be recieved as an inheritance, if the person who have recieved it was part of the noble family (and was in line to receive the warrent).

Danny, you try so hard to make your character look so badass and OP, that you totally forget about the lore of the universe. Try to make it look much more simple. Make him a noble, a wise or a militant noble.

And please, change his last name. I have spend half an hour (or more) for trying to find him a suitable name. I don't mind helping you even with his background. But just try to make it short, reasonable, logic, and within the lore.

Please, read the Warrant of Trade article, it will help you to make a good Rogue Trader.

Don't take anything of what I wrote personally, I know that I'm strict, but this is just for the sake of the rp