Board Thread:Warhammer 40k Roleplay/@comment-7974155-20140326055119/@comment-28917471-20140328104257

Oh boy... here we go...

I don't want to look like a bad person, but the Sayian Knights really look like a lore breakers, they just tear it apart!

In my opinion, using a Japanese anime as a source for creation of your chapters seems kinda laze. You just basically take the names of the anime characters, give them to the marines and name your chapter after something that is related to the anime.

Every time I saw the names of the Sayian Knights, I could think of nothing besides the characters from DBZ or Naruto something that had nothing to do with W40K.

Their names and their special abilities aren't resembling a regular Space Marines Chapter, and that creates a feeling of no relation...

There is no creativity. I can only see how much you love those animes(I'm an anime fan too by the wat), but those two things(anime and w40k) doesn't go together... not in my opinion at least...

No offense Sang, but you need to try harder, find other sources for inspiration. Take example from Talik or LOS. They work really hard in order to create an original looking faction(and you saw how much Talik have wrote about his Eldars).

I've also seen your other chapter the characters from Bleach.

Hope you get the message without hard feelings...