Board Thread:Warhammer 40k Roleplay/@comment-24821739-20140419184106/@comment-7390107-20140511165602

I hope nobody minds this...

Draven was selected amongside many others aspirants for trials to become a Space Marine...After all test and all trials he came up as first among all others...Many Space Marines have been suprised by results of his trials. After the necesary gene-seed implantations he was seconded to one scout squad where he was recognised by his tracking and hunting skills.His first deed that was recoreded was when he and his squad were droped close to large ork settlment with the task to eliminate an ork warboss...It was a success when Draven was discoverd by warboss but before he managed to do anything his was beheaded by Draven who grabed a nearby ork axe and killed him.After that he was promoted to assault squad under Sargent Engelicus.He has lead them trough many battles and almost all of his squad survived trough that until...It was and world under huge attack by orks and the PDF forces in a city were barely holding on before the arrival of few squads of space marines...It was all going well until almost two thirds of marines were killed by few ork kommandos...Altough Draven and his squad have killed them the deed has been done...After that they have formed a large squad of remainig warriors....It was at the gate of the city where they would make their last stand...As the battle started they held for whole night but at the dawn the attack was just getting out of hand...As minutes are slowly passing it was clear they will overrun them....After some time some battle brothers have gone compleatly insane as the Black Rage has overcomed them...They rushed into a middle of an ork horde but soon were killed by sheer number of orks...Engelicus seeing this urged Draven and few others to leave this place so they can survive...All of them denied the order..."If we are going to die we are going at least die fighting..."And so the squad has continued to their last breath...As the time has passed only Draven and Englicus have survived but not for long as Engelicus was killed by three nobs attacking him...Draven seeing this immediatly rushed to him and in his way beheading all three of he nobs..."Draven....please get of here..." those were his last words...That day Draven shed his first tear and vowed to never again let his commrads die like this and that this was his first and last tear...After that he grabbed a nearby Heavy bolter from a fallen guardsmen and simply pulled the trigger...Bodys were falling before him as his face full of tears and rage was firing....as the last bullet went flying he was starting to collapse...But just then the sky were like on fire as dozens upon dozens Drop pods pierced clouds and hord was stopped by intense bombardment...His last sight was Chapter Master Dante alongside many other assault marines flying over him before he collapsed....After few days of treatment he secluded him from the rest until he realised that if he keep like this all their deaths will be for naught...Reciving permission to have their dog tags he putted them in his hand swearing that he will kill the ork responsible for their deaths...After that he was in many battles and every time they encounterd orks it was like he was possesed by black rage but no his memories of commrades have been guideing him...

I hope it was good and all of you liked it...And of course tell what could be added to make it better i'm always opend to new ideas :D