Talk:Phantine Air Corps

Hey Montonius,

thanks a lot for proof-reading and "improving" my first draw. I appreciate the good intention, but your recent edit raises several problems: I will provisionnally revert to my original version to finish the article and get a global impression on how it works before hazzling over terminology.
 * "a regimental size force" - The true effectives of the Corps are unknown as Double Eagle only focuses on two Wings, Umbra and Halo and briefly mentions a third one, Orbis. As its name would suggest the Air Corps would be larger than a single regiment. I have done some research and from what I could gather so far, in modern days no Air Force uses the regiment-level distinction. France did it between 1918 and 1940 and the Soviet Union did it in WWII but numbers vary immensely, so I would not use that term.
 * "crucial tactical air support" seems a little far-fetched. As far as we know, even with Ornoff in charge of the air war on Enothis, there were only 3 Phantine Wings present as opposed to scores or even hundreds of Imperial Navy Squadrons.
 * "Astra Militarum" vs "Imperial Guard" - The introduction now features two links to the same page. As a majority of the wiki’s article still refer to the Guard as "Imperial Guard" I always favoured this denomination over "Astra Militarum" and would therefor remove that refernence.

Yours sincerely,

Silberstich (talk) 21:32, April 4, 2017 (UTC)