Thread:Algrim Whitefang/@comment-2045915-20120922060154

Zach, you need to rewrite Section 5.1 of the 13th Black Crusade article, particularly the part named "Chaos Advance." It is so unclear that I can't determine what your intent was so I can't edit it. Stick closer to the original text if you have to, but I don't understand what its trying to say. 