Board Thread:Warhammer 40k Roleplay/@comment-28917471-20150214113602/@comment-28917471-20150306134523

Ok guys, here are some notes. If you are referring to someones name, the name of that place, or just typing the letter I, then please do it with the big letter.

Master, praying while planning is kind of... odd? I know that you could not do much in this scene, but a little creativity would not hurt. You could support Sefarius with oratory, inquire if there is another way into the Koronus Expanse, or just start a conversation with someone else. But maybe your Missionary is over-zealous figure, who knows...

Also, if you are referring to the Emperor, then you ought to always call him God-Emperor. This is why the Imperial Cult exist, because they believe that the Emperor is the God of Humanity incarnate. They never call him just the Emperor.

Sanguinior, just a little grammar note. The three last lines of your last paragraph could use some commas.

Aside from that, you guys are doing great. As always, don't take too seriously my judgment.