Board Thread:Warhammer 40k Roleplay/@comment-28917471-20150603055254/@comment-28917471-20150605153555

The bio is good, except for the backgrounf of course...it is kinda contradicts the lore. I will go through them:

Let's start with Kreisner's father (early life). I am not sure about this (this may be more of an opinion than a fact), but I don't think that the imperial guards actually spread the news to the families about their recruited relatives. You said that Kreisner's family didn't even know about the death of his father, but the mother did? You do not actually explain that...

Training as a psyker: Again, how did he found out about the war on Vraks? There is nothing written about the way he recieved the news...

Time as a acolyte: Why did the inquisitor recuited Kreisner? Kreisner did not went through soul-binding, meaning that he is an unsanctioned psyker. The Inquisitors (and especially that of Ordo Malleus) rarely recruit rogue psykers. It would fit a radical to recruit a witch, but she is a puritan, so that begs the question, is she is a true puritan?

Most of humans often try to stay as far as possible from the psykers, they don't even trust the sanctioned ones (they consider them to be dangerous and cursed). So one of the acolytes, the storm trooper creates a bond with Kreisner, something the usuelly would not happen, but you could throw some execption I guess...

Kreisner is a puritan, right? Again, why does he uses a forbidden knowledge against deamons? Puritans would usually just burn it all down and leave nothing...